Short thing. Longer than anticipated, but still rather short for me. Hetero, actually, in a way. No point mentioning pairing because in Saiyuki, slash outnumbers het by about 50:1. If you're tolerant not to go "EW EW HETERO OMFG DIE!" then you should be fine. I'm not too creative here.

If it's out of character, I should remind that I've only read the manga, and as of this writing only the first three volumes have been released.

Saiyuki characters et cetera © and ™ Kazuya Minekura, ENIX and TV Tokyo, 1997. Used without permission, for nonprofit fan appreciation.

The views expressed in this fanfic do not necessarily reflect the opinions of anyone except me.

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Worry Rock
 
 

    For a moment there, just for a little while, it was enough to lie and listen to his heartbeat.
    But then it passed, and Yaone pushed herself off the bed, in a bid to escape the lure of warmth before it caused more problems.
    Hakkai wasn't asleep, of course; he never fell asleep right after intercourse, unlike the other men she had been with.
    Now Yaone wondered if this were so much to Hakkai's credit. The way he watched her with simple, pleasant contentment, eyes half-lidded and blank, and that smile. And the conversation, well, while not up to his usual standard, was still far too sobering for her in the aftermath.
    He lay there, reclined against the sheets and tousled pillows, and made no effort to get up and dress with her. He didn't need to. It was his hotel room, after all. It would've been far too dangerous to ever try this back at her group's base of operations, but at least in the midst of enemy territory Yaone could be halfway assured her adversaries would be easy-going if they ever found out. Not that they ever would, now.
    "We have to end this," she said, pulling on her bikini bottom, plasticky nylon snapping painfully on her hips. A total reversal of the sensuality she had put in taking them off less than an hour before. She rushed to strap her bra on, criss-crossed chains digging into skin thankfully not marked up as it had been after some of their previous outings. She'd asked that he be careful and spare her the odd looks from her comrades. No point in that now. No point.
    Hakkai moved only his head to get a better look at her. "Why?"
    There was no pleading. Just a simple inquiry.
    "Because..." she began, shaking her head while she herself tried to reconcile the answer with herself. "Because I'm sick of this."
    Couldn't do it anymore. Couldn't keep up the act, couldn't stifle out that part of her heart that was never going to be content here. Couldn't rationalize with herself that it all wasn't just a way to forget--
    Not when the person taking her was only making it worse--
    "It's my fault," she went on bitterly, not meeting his gaze. "I should have known, should really have known this wasn't going to work."
    "What do you mean?"
    Again so calmly. And with that smile. He never stopped smiling. It rendered the very concept of happiness insincere.
    Polite, concerned little smile, like he'd upset a child and was wondering if a lollipop would make it all better. Some small generosity to ameliorate. Like it could help anything.
    Yaone emitted something almost approaching a growl, as she swung her vestment on, not even bothering with the chains to her stockings. She didn't even bother to fix her hair.
    "I mean-- it's like there's no point, trying to get through to you. It's just I really should have known, you and that-- well-- all three of them!" She waved a hand in vague fury. Didn't want to even think about the specifics. "You love them all so much."
    So often, too.
    And far more vocally.
    Hell, and the bruises she saw the next day--
    She would not cry. She wouldn't. This is what she told herself, knotting her midsection sash up so messily even though she knew it would just mean having to redo it later.
    And wasn't it all, really, just displacing other things?
    Back home she could almost accept when... he... was asked to be a bit more 'actively involved' in persuading some incredibly stunning, but stubborn, foreign dignitary. It was less acceptable on the road when the occasional enrapturing peasant girl would do just as well. And then, now and again, even Dokugakuji..! And meanwhile, she--
    Was she such a nonissue to him?
    Did she mean anything to anyone?
    "I just can't compete," she finished, more lamely than she would have hoped, but not caring. Not even remembering what half of her problem she was saying this to. Maybe both.
    She felt sick. She almost wondered if there were anything more that could be said, anything that could possibly make this conversation even worse, even more acidic, bilious and so full of...
    ...No words. No words for it.
    Almost belatedly Yaone realized that silence had fallen in, and that she wasn't sure if Hakkai had responded while she was lost in her thoughts, or had chosen to leave her last remark unchallenged.
    But she wouldn't meet his gaze, though she knew he was looking at her.
    And she couldn't back down now.
    When he spoke, it was such a foreign sound that her ears twinged. And the voice, though calm and passive, had an emotion to it she had never encountered before.
    "Who's trying to compete?" Hakkai asked.
    Before she could steel herself against it she had lifted her gaze to him. And nearly froze as she saw she could recognize the expression on his face, had seen it every time she had come to visit him late at night, but for the first time understood it with a new connotation.
    So that was how it was.
 
 

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finished at: 16:47 01 September, 2004

~K.A. Rose

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'Nother sentimental argument and bitter love
Fucked without a kiss again
Dragged it through the mud
Yelling at brick walls
And punching windows made of stone
The worry rock has turned to dust
Fallen on our pride
A knocked down, dragged out fight
Fat lips and open wounds
Another wasted night
And no one will take the fall
Where do we go from here
And what did you do with the directions?
Promise me no dead-end streets
And I'll guarantee we'll have the road

--Green Day